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Monday 29 August 2016

The Exhibition


I went up stairs to watch the movies then my mum gave me some money then I went down stairs I bought coconut balls and russian fudge then me and my dad went to look at my brother's learning then we went over the bridge then I got a piece of cake. Then I had a burger  for dinner.

By Fergus 

5 comments:

  1. Holla Fergus.My name is Blake.I really like the way you told me what you did.I think you should really reflect on your punctuation.What was the hardest thing in your writing?

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  2. Holla Fergus.My name is Blake.I really like the way you told me what you did.I think you should really reflect on your punctuation.What was the hardest thing in your writing?

    ReplyDelete
  3. Holla Fergus.My name is Blake.I really like the way you told me what you did.I think you should really reflect on your punctuation.What was the hardest thing in your writing?

    ReplyDelete
  4. Holla Fergus.My name is Blake.I really like the way you told me what you did.I think you should really reflect on your punctuation.What was the hardest thing in your writing?

    ReplyDelete
  5. Holla Fergus.My name is Blake.I really like the way you told me what you did.I think you should really reflect on your punctuation.What was the hardest thing in your writing?

    ReplyDelete