Hi, I really liked your writing! How did you get the idea of spiders? From Jack
Hello, I really enjoyed reading you writing. It was very exciting. I liked how you added the spiders. How did you make those spiders?
Hello I really love your writing and I really like how you used your imagination too. From Ryan
Hi Ted, I liked your story about the spiders because the spiders waited for the teachers and learners to go home. Where is the spider's cave?
Hi, I liked the way you explained that they wanted to be secret and to do that they waited for everyone to leave school. Next time you could add more information about the spiders. What type of spiders were they?